English Editor
An essential service for business writers who are not confident that their own written English is as good as it should be. It needs to reflect the otherwise professional delivery of the company’s goods and services.
Very few small to medium businesses use an advertising agency. Agencies automatically care for the quality of English texts they write for their clients. An English editor is a more affordable option and clients routinely send their texts to us before they publish or print.
Please ask any questions about the role of an English editor and how we can work with you… email: info@villagescribe.com.au
An example of English Editing ……..
The words we received for a letter to a patient from a business selling natural remedies….
Dear ……
Your condition is very common. We had helped a lot of people about your condition. We have some customer who even have headache but they feel better now.
Your body work too hard and you may have too much toxic in your body; therefore your body is not well.
I strongly recommend you to try ‘xxxxx’ to detox and ‘yyyyy’ to repair your immune system and organ.
These will give you complete health supplement. This is similar to your home, if you want to have a new kitchen, you have to repair it and then clean and polish at the same time. If you just repair it without clear the waste, it will still look dirty.
You need to take 1 ‘xxxx’ and 1 ‘yyyy’ in the morning before breakfast, and then 1 ‘xxxxx’ and 1 ‘yyyyy at around 4pm. You will start feeling better after 2-3 weeks. Total 4 capsules for 2-3 months. You can take this product for long term.
Regards,
…. and the edited text we sent back.
Dear ….
Your condition is not uncommon. We have been able to assist many people who have been unwell in this way, even some with headaches, who no longer suffer after a course of treatment.
At times we just work ourselves too hard, this causes toxins to collect in the body.
We recommend you use ‘xxxxx’ to detoxify the body and ‘yyyyy’ to repair your immune system.
These two in combination will administer a broad-spectrum health supplement. An analogy might be that if you want to renovate your kitchen you need first to clean it, then repair and refresh it with paint. One part of the job without the other would not deliver the complete renovation.
We recommend that each day, you take 1 ‘xxxxx’ and 1 ‘yyyyy’ in the morning before breakfast and then 1 of each again around 4pm. You will start feeling better after 2-3 weeks. Continue to take a total of 4 capsules per day for 2-3 months.
After the full course, you can still take these products over the long term to help maintain wellbeing.
yours sincerely,
